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Now that was a great post Mxy...I will add to the story tomorrow.
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Thanks. Thanks. Originally it was gonna be longer, but... it wasn't.
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Agreed.
As I said to Grimm, there aren't many posts left until this story is wrapped. How long it takes me to make those posts, that's another story.
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Hmmm...I was hoping this story would last awhile...i like it.
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I don't want it to be one of those forgotten Elseboards threads that end up at the bottom of page 16...
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I was gonna make a post tonight, but after conversing with Mxy, the intended post was determined to be unnecessary storywise. So, no post for you! ![[nyah hah]](images/icons/tongue.gif)
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There, I´ve put our troops in shit-creek.
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Yay, posts! Well done, gentlemen.
I'm gonna try to post something as soon as I can.
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I'm hitting a wall as far as this story goes. ![[sad]](images/icons/frown.gif)
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ok folks i need to know how many more posts till the Group is back at HQ, got some plot stuff to set in place for some thing i' want to do a few storys down the road.
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quote:
Originally posted by Blackwulf:
ok folks i need to know how many more posts till the Group is back at HQ, got some plot stuff to set in place for some thing i' want to do a few storys down the road.
Yes, wrong thread, but in any case, since the story has just begun, it's easy to foresee it will take a dozen of pages and three months before the FOUR groups will return to the headquarter.
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No panic folks...just do some action sequences if you can´t push the story further.
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Worked for Matrix Reloaded...
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I swear I have something in mind!
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I swear I'll write a giant fight scene when I have the time.
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HA! You were about to unheadline it, weren't you? HA!, I say.
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![[whaaaa!]](eek01.gif) You say, "HA", eh? ...well, I guess that just about says it all then, doesn't it?
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My trip to Mallorca was canceled so now I have time to post LOTS of stuff here.
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Okay guys and lassies...join the party of death ![[biiiig grin]](images/icons/grin.gif)
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I still want to write a big fight scene. But I'll wait for the right moment...
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Don't forget about all the hot, repressed Victorian sex!
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OK... the big fight with Agent Partypooper should come next. I really don't have any plans, other than fighting the Agent. I can't remember how this Agent was named, by the way... but that's secondary.
TTT: If you wanna bring your characters in, now would be a good time to do it.
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Just a thought, Euro. Phil Smith may yell at people sometimes. He may lose his temper sometimes. Elias Smith is ice. He's been through the Civil War, for crying out loud! He's seen plenty of horrifying stuff. This is comparatively weak. (No offense to our writers, but real war is far more frightening than any story any of us could concoct.) Besides, Elias has way more self-control than Phil (and probably a few of the other characters in this story). He's not likely to shout at people a lot. But it's a minor point; I love your writing in the story all the same.
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quote:
Originally posted by Captain Sammitch:
Just a thought, Euro. Phil Smith may yell at people sometimes. He may lose his temper sometimes. Elias Smith is ice. He's been through the Civil War, for crying out loud! He's seen plenty of horrifying stuff. This is comparatively weak. (No offense to our writers, but real war is far more frightening than any story any of us could concoct.) Besides, Elias has way more self-control than Phil (and probably a few of the other characters in this story). He's not likely to shout at people a lot. But it's a minor point; I love your writing in the story all the same.
Ok, I will see if I can edit it. But don't take my writings too literally. Read the happenings, and don't give too weight to the actual words I use. Sometime I have time and check the dictionary a lot, but sometime I write in a rush to beat everyone else at posting, and my choice of words becomes... casual.
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quote:
Originally posted by I'm Not Mister Mxypltk:
Awesome post, Euro!
Thank you Mxy, I had fun writing it.
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Ok. I tried to set up the gigantic final fight so that all loose ends (like "where is gone Cavalli?" and , more important, "Why an exorcist was enlisted for the team?", "when finally Jack will reveal to be a baddie?" and "what's the Captain Glucksomething presented at the beginning is gone?") are taken into consideration.
Cavalli is fighting the demon, but the evil agent has still his powers intact, and the other agents and the whole Mandelovian Army are still at his command. And I don't think it's just a matter of mind control, I think the loyalty of Mandelovian to one of his own opposed to invasors from abroad plays an important part, here.
So, there is bread for everyone's thoot.
Rogues, get funky! (oohps, wrong team!)
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quote:
Originally posted by The Eurostar:
Cavalli is fighting the demon, but the evil agent has still his powers intact, and the other agents and the whole Mandelovian Army are still at his command. And I don't think it's just a matter of mind control, I think the loyalty of Mandelovian to one of his own opposed to invasors from abroad plays an important part, here.
I dissagree with that. The army should only attack the Rogues as long as Agent Beta controls them. And I think the other Agents were never under his control. They fought the Rogues earlier because they really believed they were doing the right thing.
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. . .I'm extremely confused. . .
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quote:
Originally posted by I'm Not Mister Mxypltk:
I dissagree with that. The army should only attack the Rogues as long as Agent Beta controls them. And I think the other Agents were never under his control. They fought the Rogues earlier because they really believed they were doing the right thing.
Ok, no prob.
We have:
Cavalli fighting the demon
Gluckfall attacked by the agents because they think it's the right thing.
Agent "Beta" (let's call him this way, but in fact it's not a beta, it's the double S of the German alphabet, that incidentally I don't know how it is called) still mentally pushing the Rogues toward Hell
the Airship of Gluckfall, lead by Quantos, fighting the Mandelovian army, until the soldiers will be freed from Beta's mind control.
That's better, Mxy? Feel free to correct me, and also I am at disposal to edit any part of my post.
Grimm, this helps?
Come on, guys, let's finish this story, it's cool and it deserves an ending. Let's have it not fading into nothingness like all the elseworld (and, before anyone correct me, I know this is in the main Universe).
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I wasn't gonna say I'm working on a post so no one felt discouraged to post, but since it's taking me a while I better say it: I'm working on a post. It's not something big or really good or anything, it's just that I haven't had much to time to work on it.
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quote:
Posted by Euro: Grimm, this helps?
Cleared a few things up, though I still have no idea what to post right now. ![[eh... i dunno... ]](graemlins/ehidunno.gif)
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