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I wasn't happy with the previous designs for my main characters, so I went back into Poser and redid them. Less stylized, more realistic, something like that. I'll have to make a new cover now, but oh well. Commentage would be lovely.
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WOW! These are awesome. Good job baby!
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Posted. I think this could be my best chapter so far. One more to go...
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That's a wrap. I know a lot of you have been waiting to read the whole thing at once. Here's your chance. Think I'll try and work on a new cover until I go to work.
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Great story, Phil.
I like the ending.
A lot.
Very nice.
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New cover... I felt the background of the old cover was a bit too minimalistic. Plus I wanted to incorporate the newer designs for my characters...
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well, your poser skills have gotten better.
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Thanks. Hopefully the writing skills show some improvement as well.
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Holy crap. Wrote another one in three days. I'm writing shorter ones now, since Gooz suggested they could be used as potential TV screenplays on his virtual Hollywood site (which I should point out is a lot of fun). So this one's shorter, a little quicker-paced, but hopefully as good a read if not better.
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damn, Sammitch. you're churning some shit out here lately.
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As in a lot of stuff or as in it sucks? Wait, don't answer that!
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I likr the Bright stories
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As in a lot of stuff or as in it sucks? Wait, don't answer that! no, I meant in the "lot of stuff" manner. I realized after that it wasn't a great choice of words.
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I know it's a lotta sh... a lotta story to read through, but your feedback is more than welcome.
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it's probably gonna be a while before I can sit and read anything like this. I've got about three/four scripts I'm trying to finish up.
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Since I got my computer back, when I haven't been working on the latest Bright or plodding away at RDCW stuff, I've been playing with the sketch plugins I added to my Photoshop. Here's a new poster I made using my favorite of those plugins:
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My only complaint with the last picture is it looks like the girls' shirts look like they were painted on. Unless you we going for that look. Flipping through a couple of the Brights now. See? I can make time when I try. Heh.
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CJ feedback! Wheeeeeeeee!!! Yeah, I'm not very thrilled with the shirts that way either. It's been noticed before (I forget by whom), but the only way to fix it is a painfully drawn-out process of manually editing the geometries, and I haven't had a chance to sit down and iron out ( ) the shirts yet. Maybe soon, but I have more Bright stuff to work on, not to mention the whole process of moving and what have you. I think the best thing I did with Bright was to keep the episodes (except for the "pilot" one) to a manageable length (about twenty pages in Word), so they weren't all massive undertakings to read. Granted, that had as much to do with the particulars of Gooz's site as anything else, but it still worked out well in the end.
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not done with #6 yet, just wanted to lock it up until I come up with the last two posts.
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i really didnt see the Chewy Walrus sodomy arc coming in the last chapter!
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Thats some pretty gay shit Sammtitch (copyright PenWing).
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