The dialogue is too Ult. Spider-man/Valley girl esque.
Seems very forced too
That is EXACTLY what I was thinking! The dialogue is the bland and cliched, as far as modern comics go. I mean, Bendis has absolutely raped the modern comic dialogue motif by introducing this dry, run-on nonsense that he pretends is reminiscent of real life "speaking". It makes me cringe to see other writers pick up this horrid fad of his...
