The dialogue is too Ult. Spider-man/Valley girl esque.
Seems very forced too
That is EXACTLY what I was thinking! The dialogue is the bland and cliched, as far as modern comics go. I mean, Bendis has absolutely raped the modern comic dialogue motif by introducing this dry, run-on nonsense that he pretends is reminiscent of real life "speaking". It makes me cringe to see other writers pick up this horrid fad of his...
Yeah.
It's kind of a shame cause his style worked well in Ult. Spider-man but ever since he's started writing both Avengrs books(which downright sucks) I can't stand it anymore. To the point I had to drop Ult Spider-man.
