RKMBs Forums .::Important::. Writer's Block Best Kept Secret - discussion

I'm honestly not sure if anyone even comes here anymore, but I was sitting here trying to motivate myself to write some more stuff and thought I'd start posting some of what I have so far. This is just a script I've been chipping away at for Gooz's site; it's still rather rough but I'm knocking it into shape. Or rather I was until work got busy. If anyone does read it they can leave any feedback here. Thanks.

As soon as I got to "Take a picture. It will last longer." I stopped reading.

Cliches are a sure fire way to kill attention spans.

Immediate dismissal from Pariah. This will be the best thing I've ever written. Also, aphorism =/= cliché.

I actually have a lot of this done already; I'm just trying to pace my posts so I don't catch up before I'm done writing it.

It's a repetitive phrase easily spotted in popular culture. Cliche.