Well what a big pile of fun we have here! Please remember that none of my comments are insults, they are my honest reviews of your work.

Uschi, well, you have great drawing talent, but the story leaves something to be desired. The pacing is really messed up, and there's the whole issue of it not making any sense. In a bad way. [nyah hah]

Mxy, I could barely be bothered to read yours. It's a Captain Underpants remix, through and through.

Neil, I like it. It's really got something going. I agree that black and white would have been more effective for the second strip, with maybe the yellow and green as the only colors. Pacing, again, needs a little work, but it's fun.

Jack, yours is very good. I like that it's a one-time thing, can no room for a sequel. Fast and humorous, so to speak.

Disco... I liked yours the most. Please don't take any sort of a more-comedic (than there already is) edge on this. It's fine as is. I say keep going with this format, experimenting with story styles, and then go all out. This is the kind of stuff is critically acclaimed but the sales lack. All was good, except for the last panel. Seemed out of character, even though said characters had been established two, three panels earlier.

I look forward to Bobo Comics #2. :)