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Dave... I liked yours the most. Please don't take any sort of a more-comedic (than there already is) edge on this. It's fine as is. I say keep going with this format, experimenting with story styles, and then go all out. This is the kind of stuff is critically acclaimed but the sales lack. All was good, except for the last panel. Seemed out of character, even though said characters had been established two, three panels earlier.
Thanks man. I was going for an avant garde, non-existential feel to it, and it looks like I hit the mark.