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Originally posted by Marc Campbell:
Mxy and Disco, I followed the link to your site. Your comic ain't gonna finish itself. Tell me now of Year Man, and I'll get on your case about not finishing.
Year Man was about a fellow who gets superpowers, but then finds out he has a year to live. It's more of a description (like "Dr. Who") than an actual name.

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Disco, good job with the SFX challenge so far. Now what if all six shots missed? Because it's Spidey who's getting shot at. By the way, he's in a warehouse, and the wall that stops the bullets recedes into darkness...
PANEL 1
We're in a dark warehouse. Frank Castle, in a teenage girl's homecoming dress, is shooting upwards, the gunfire illuminating his face like kids when they position flashlights under their chin when they tell ghost stories. Scary stuff.

PUNISHER: Dog my cats, you little mountebank wanker!

PANEL 2
We're looking down at Spider-Man webslinging across the warehouse. His penis is bulging. Six bullets coming from Punisher's gun are missing Spider-Man. The bullets are flying at an angle so that they would hit the wall across from Punisher.

SPIDER-MAN: Ah-ha! You sir, are a sub-par marksman and are like a bowlerdized children's novel in the bedroom.

PANEL 3
As bullets hit it, the walls of the warehouse "recede into darkness?" I don't quite get that.

I'm pretty sure it's a bit incoherent, but it should make at least a bit of sense.