Well, in general, I like what you've been doing. You've been a posting maniac for much of this story, really going at it. Heavily detailed posts with lots of character stuff. We've seen damn near all your HR characters in this story, so far, which is pretty cool.
I really liked the way you built up the suspense with Dr. Quantos and Grimm a while back.
But the sheer volume of what you've posted at times makes it difficult, at least for me, to read it all in one sitting and effectively comment. A lot of times in this story I've had to go back and reread some of your stuff just to make sure I got it all. Nothing wrong with your posting, I'm just saying.
