quote:Originally posted by Prometheus: Okay, I just made a short post, beginning a few things. I'll be adding to it probably tonight or tomorrow. So, no one mess with it, eh?
Ok, but there is one thing you wrote that sounds strange: you show the gates opening, but Grimm stated that to function, the arctifact Collins gave Naecken needs bloods of a virgin (he suggested Tayden or Brianna). I think that's a cool thing, it would be bad not to aknowledge it.
Other thing, having the Invisible man inside the fortress, it could be a good way to free Mick. I guess that's up to TTT, anyway.
Third, where the hell Amock come from? I lost tracks of him on the route of La Perdita, he has freed himself, or the Vanguardians have let him loose?
I am enjoying immensely this battle. The mix of drama and humor is something our stories have lacked for a long time.