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Supposedly posted by TheTimeTrust:
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Supposedly posted by Captain Sammitch:
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Originally posted by TheTimeTrust:
Just read the rest of Captain Sammitch's posts. Good job. I like what you did with Koning, though a mention of Chance being somewhat shocked that he's using his legs rather than being wheelchair-bound would be nice. Reminds me of a Saturday Night Live skit in which they find the so-called "alternate ending" of It's A Wonderful Life, in which Old Man Potter, the banker, is discovered to not be a cripple at all and is beat up by the townsfolk as they begin singing "Auld Lang Syne"... It's kinda funny.
I'm sorry, TTT, I didn't notice that. I can edit my post if you want.
Just a small edit is necessary, to show Chance's shock or indignation at being deceived about Koning's supposedly needing a wheelchair.
*clears throat*

*looks at watch*

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