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Sonhaven, good stuff. I'm really enjoying this "subadventure."
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Oh, and Phil, very interesting! [ 02-23-2003, 11:38 PM: Message edited by: GoozX ]
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quote: Originally posted by The Eurostar: 30? You are still a child, Pro!
Okay, now you are my favorite person... :)
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Ok guys, even though I am busy as hell, I am going to attempt at least one short story point every day this week. I challenge everyone to do the same. Lets see what you guys are made of. Grimm, JD, Son: The new character I just introed is named Jason Hill. He was coming to visit family when he found the whole Town as it is. He is 24 and has blond hair/ green eyes (resembles Sam a little bit). Feel free to use him anyway you like. Add anyback story you like to him too. :)
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GREAT challenge Ritchie! Maybe the "MBL leader" is well merited. I will try to keep up to the challenge.
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quote: Originally posted by The Eurostar:
Maybe the "MBL leader" is well merited.
Or maybe someone just has an ego...
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Getting a little defensive, aren't you, Danny? ![[wink]](images/icons/wink.gif)
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Hey, I'm not the one who had my character take on a leadership role in the story without consulting anyone about it just to fulfill my own character ideas!
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See, this is the point where we need that dude posting as Brian Fellows to come in here and say: "That's crazy!"
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Put down the gun, Danny. No body wants to get hurt.
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I'm confident, not egotistical...... confident..... ![[wink]](images/icons/wink.gif)
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oops....I mean, Gooz is. ![[wink]](images/icons/wink.gif)
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quote: Originally posted by thedoctor: See, this is the point where we need that dude posting as Brian Fellows to come in here and say: "That's crazy!"
Please, the last thing this forum needs is bsams. He's fucked up every other place to post around here already. If you need me to, I can carry the load of quoting the same three Big Lebowski lines every other post.
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quote: Originally posted by Danny: Hey, I'm not the one who had my character take on a leadership role in the story without consulting anyone about it just to fulfill my own character ideas!
Sorry about that, but nobody else was posting in issue #5!
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quote: Originally posted by Kristogar Velo: If you need me to, I can carry the load of quoting the same three Big Lebowski lines every other post.
Could you?! That'd be swell!
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Obviously you're not a golfer.
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Kristogar, post in the story, dammit! ![[wink]](images/icons/wink.gif)
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The Chinaman is not the issue here.
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quote: Originally posted by GoozX: Oh, and Phil, very interesting!
Thank you. It gets better!
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I was gonna make a post, but I gotta discuss something with Danny first...
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quote: Originally posted by Kristogar Velo: [QUOTE]Sorry about that, but nobody else was posting in issue #5!
And that's why we fired you!
Oh, and... say what you want about the tenets of national socialism, at least it's an ethos.
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![[eh?]](images/icons/confused.gif) what?! are you sure you're not hitler?
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Sorry for my absence of late, guys. I've been busy with some other things. I finally wrote the scene of Kit at the airport doing his deal with the Mafia guys, though I had to write it as a flashback since another full page of posts happened since the last time he was seen. Chewy -- I dunno how you'll get Grissom out of the building safely now that Fisher's here, but as soon as you can get him to Kit, the kidnapping plot idea we discussed can begin in earnest. Check the PM message I sent you a while back for what happens next. I'll probably send you and Sammitch another update, though... Euro -- sorry I haven't been contributing my share of the South American adventure, even though Chance is supposed to be team leader. I'll re-read what's been written so far and get back into the thick of things soon. Gooz -- good to see you back again and writing! :) Everyone else -- I have a feeling this is going to be a long story, but it should be a "gud'n"... ![[wink]](images/icons/wink.gif) We just have to cut down on the superfluous "personal" stuff that doesn't involve anyone but your own characters as much as possible and stick to the team's main plots -- isn't that right, Cap'n? ![[yuh huh]](images/icons/rolleyes.gif)
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quote: Originally posted by TheTimeTrust: I have a feeling this is going to be a long story, but it should be a "gud'n"...
Comedy gold!
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quote: Originally posted by TheTimeTrust: We just have to cut down on the superfluous "personal" stuff that doesn't involve anyone but your own characters as much as possible and stick to the team's main plots --
Coming from the guy who just made two post about a supporting character's subplot. ![[wink]](images/icons/wink.gif)
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Ah, but that's different. The kidnapping plot affects the entire team, and it also leads into the fourth team mission for the MBLers still on the island... If it was just about Kit, I would've made it a solo thread.
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never mind...i think subplots belong anywhere in the story...without them the world is to static... And your little story here is great TTT. :)
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