RKMBs Forums .::Important::. Writer's Block Here's a bit of [Hero] Speculation...

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Originally posted by TheTimeTrust:
BTW, Pro, what did you think of that TTT one-shot I linked for you?

I wrote it before I created my "Pete" character, and almost thought about using TTT as a main character, but I decided that writing a godlike being would be too difficult, so I went with a character as earthy as possible instead...

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TTT, I am sincerely impressed!!

What an excellent bookend to the Trust character. It wrapped-up pretty damn near every single plot thread dealing with The Trust. I especially enjoyed the hints as to why Pro and TTT don't like each other, and the use of the color purple, when defining the Infinity's power level.

Well done! :)

I must say, though, do you really think the old universe is gone........forever?

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Ultimately, however, the universe they resided in ceased to exist. That universe had a past, however, as well as a future, and although it does no longer exist to us, it did once exist.

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Originally posted by thedoctor.

Also, when this battle is done, it'd be a favor to me if no one writes that Dirk's injuries go away just because they leave wherever they are. It'll allow for a good sub-plot or tie in. [/QB]

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The doctor definitely wants to go somewhere with this. Check his last few posts in the story.

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Originally posted by The Eurostar:
But, I want to ask to you and to Pro a thing: if we are to confront a being that is able to channel evil out of criminals and use it to pump up the villains of this story, don't you believe that he could know things that no one should know, like Schanz and Zee existence?

Yes, absolutely. I can even see him taunting Turkish with that knowledge.

Turkish meeting Zee: so what? He thinks that the world is forever safe. Now, what's his purpose now?

I understand clearly. But, you aren't getting my point. IF you had Z just walking up and saying "Hi Turkish", and for Turkish to "think that the world is forever safe", then he'd HAVE to know who Z is for it to mean anything. I don't want him remembering, yet. If ever. THAT'S the only reason he's with this team, and hasn't returned to The Order. I have no incredibly serious problem with what you've done, except that it just doesn't work for the basis of where my character is at in the storytelling right now.

After all, these are the villains that have been gathered for nearly a year to have their revenge unleashed upon the MBL. What story would be if they are so easily beaten like they were?

Well, let's write them as a SERIOUS threat, then. I took them as cannon fodder before the main baddie. This is no slight towards you, or anyone else. I just misinterpreted this anti-MBL as second-tier bad guys, the way everyone kept writing them being beaten so easily. I tried to make Knell more of a threat, exploring how resistant and primal he could be while in lizard form. At the same time, leaving the others to interpret the battle in their own way. But, hell, we're talking about an evil speedster, alone, could mutilate HALF the team in a few seconds. That is, if you want realistic. If we have a match-up with them, I can promise you that I'll make them a threat, in some form or fashion towards every member of the team. :)

Pro, I have read and I have though a lot about your response to my observation about you wrote Aurochs. OK, I still believe that he would have acted differently, but at last I see that you reserved for him the usual love you put in writing everybody.

Of course, man. I love Aurochs. I think he's a great character to be explored. And, after his first battle with Turkish, I can imagine the two will have future dealings. But, just make clear what it is you want so inherently defined about him, in contrast to how I wrote him. :)

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Originally posted by I'm Not Mister Mxypltk:
PM, Pro for you!

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Originally posted by T5:
The Hero Revolution Special [Eurostar: Soaring over madness] is great...i love roadtrip stories.
You´re doing great Euro.

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So I guess my posts in the story haven't been great than. I see how it is.

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I may be alone in this, but I took the defeats of Aurochs and Knell as temporary at best, and I fully expect them to come back pissed off and more dangerous than before. And I saw the battle as far from being over as Mxy had yet to deal with Ktl, and Ma Kalunga was still around, and I DID have an idea for Ma to deal with being outnumbered. The way I thought the story was supposed to be going, we defeat the anti-MBL at the end of this issue, and then deal with Mr. Smith in the next, it was supposed to be a two part story, wasn't it?

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Originally posted by The Eurostar:
About Aurochs, thanks for your words. When he will return, as a solo villain, I bet we'll have fun. Like I said, he should bbe alsways behind a column, figuratively and actually. He doesn't say: "Come here little monk". He could definitely think of saying that next time he meets Turkish, but then, he would be too scared to even let himself being seen by Stringfellow. Yet, that wouldn't prevent him, from his hiding place, to send half of Hell toward the monk. I hope this help you in visualize how I see Aurochs.

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Supposedly posted by T5:
Hey...the fight is far from over...write.
Expand the story...have fun...everyone quit whining.
we´re doing this for fun remember...just improvise, and things will work out fine.

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Originally posted by The Eurostar:
Gooz: thanks for the fun you are giving me in the solo story.

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I'm having just as much fun as you are Wait until you see the next shocker I'm about to throw in

I just noticed the title change, cool and thanks :)