So, it seems I start writing, and everyone else backs off. Dammit, where is everyone?
Anyway, I've taken up a chunk of the first page to familiarize myself with this new team, and for you guys (and the characters) to understand Turkish. I tried to wrap it up as quickly as possible, since I feel that T5 wants to get down to Uraguay quickly.
As for your characters, this is how I've grasped themso far:
--Sam and Danny are the "friends". The buddies. They have alot in common, and even more so not. Thus, a great chemistry between them, as their polar-opposite behaviors bounce off each other. Danny's got book-smarts, while Sam's got common sense.
--If Sam and Danny are the compadres, then Mick and Larry are something near Booster Gold (Larry) and Blue Beetle (Mick). Or, maybe, Hawkeye (Mick) and Trapper John (Larry) from M.A.S.H. That's how I see them, so far. Notice I have yet to mess with the Mxy part, though. I'll do that when I feel I've got it. (BTW, I felt that Turkish would at least "see" a double-exposure to Mick's "aura".)
--I haven't messed with Pete yet, since TTT hasn't written anything for me to see how he acts. Is he the pessimist and Schanz (?) the optimist of this composite? Anyway, I'll let TTT write something before Turkish has any interaction with him. Or, TTT could do the interaction.
--Kit Piper is Maxwell Lord, and we all know it.
--Shirley's the "mother" of the bunch. The "Black Canary" to this "JLI" team. But, she IS dating/having-sex-with Mick, right?
--Naecken is exactly like T5 wrote he and Turkish together. Lots of fun here.
-"T5" a mechanical dog? Is this a companion for Tobias' "Lil' Jo"? Hmmmmm. Either way, no offense, I think I'll be letting others take care of those two. Sorry, but I have nothing for "pets", other than they are there.
Anyway, hope I've got everything as close as possible.
GOOZ: Was Turkish's "interaction" with the building appropriate?