I like what you've written. Pro. One thing though, Drake is about 27 years old so he would have been about 12 in 1988 and 15 in '91. He didn't actually start his crimefighting until he was 18 (in '94) and it was all pretty small time until '95 when he started his partnership with Jessica Blackburn and the Nightwatch persona was actually born. He didn't get bonded to Drax until spring of 2002 (that's when my solo story is taking place) so most of Drake's publicized activities as a vigilante would have taken place between January of '95 and April of 2002.

Sorry I didn't share this earlier, but hopefully you can make use of it now. We could just explain the mix-up with the dates with Ozzy being overly excited about talking to Drake about his "adventures".