Danny : Fun stuff! Love seeing Danny in action. Fight scenes are fun.

Euro : LOL! Nice clean-up, but, with a Danny-like twist. Well done.

Doc : You've really gotten into the reasoning/detective aspect of Adem, and it works perfectly for the character. After the fact, I realized the way I wrote Drake in my 'Zarch'-post might have come off similiarly. That was not my intent, but, rather, I was hoping to set up the difference between Adem's natural intuitive detective skills, and, Drake's experienced urban-tactical prowess.

The steps taken by Adem, using logic and reasoning, that helped him reach the proper conclusions about Matthews, were executed with expertise. I was really impressed by this, as this team definitely needs its 'Prometheus' character (not comparing the two, by the way, except in the needed role they seem to fill in their respective teams). Adem Different is becoming a very interesting character.

But, I also enjoyed how you, as the writer, reached some basic logical conclusions on your own (i.e. the undead using Matthews, his lack of military expertise on the battlefield, etc.). Very, very impressed with this. Nicely done.

I really enjoyed the Adem/Ozzy bits. Done any other way, and it would come off as sappy. But, not only did you craft with enough realistic atmosphere and dialogue (dialogue being one of your strongest points), I also detected the hint that Adem is attempting to find and cultivate the proper cultural expression for situations like this. Well done, indeed.

Well, I probably will not add anything today. It's my birthday and I'm going to be lazy. And very drunk.

So, everyone get out there, and write for my own amusement!!