Aside from the fucking up, I think that the idea of the city of red Archers was a good idea, even if I had to rush a conclusion for it, to realign the story.

In fact, I think we are doing an incredible work, but to be even more good, we should pay more attention to the lgic of the story.

The run away of Brianna was a good idea, but that should have opened up a turning point for the story. She could have been captured, or she copuld have stumbled upon the opposite faction of the civil war. Instead, nothing of importance happened, and that makes less significant that move.

The attack to the city of red archers gave meaning to that part, more than if they simply returned back to the camp, IMO.