No Danny, like always I am not able to express my feeling properly.

First, I said that writing the discovering and the attack to the Red Archer city, IN MY OPINION you did a better job than Doc, that wrote the Danny subteam returning so soon to the camp. So, for me, your posts MADE a lot of sense (not counting the fact that you didn't get that they were back at the camp from the previous post).

Second, I am saying that everyone seems very concerned to the quality of characterization, and that is good, but no one has ever expressed the same concern for the quality of the stories. For example, the need to have the heroes findings problems and maybe temporary defeat before becoming able to win the day. I am not saying that we HAVE to do thing in one way or the other, just that not just the characters do the story, but also the events. We could care or not, like we could care or not for characterization.
Said that, I am sure it is important also for you, or you wouldn't have proposed to do a story told backward.