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You crazy son of a bitch.

I'm at the end of page two. Will read more soon.

Nice work, so far. The end might still suck.


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I liked your Danny Braveheart speech. The thing about the regular stories is, I never really gave Danny the one defining moment where he accepted his leadership. It was something that happened gradually. I like seeing it summed up in a singular turning point for him and the team. It's cool.

A point:

Sometimes...

You break up your descriptions...

...into single sentences.

Spaced apart.

...which is cool...

...when appropriate...

...but can lose it's effect when overdone. Sometimes keeping them all in the one paragraph can work fine. But that's a minor point.

I really dig the Klone/X/V/Saros/Continuity stuff. You remember far too much about stories from years ago that I couldn't even tell you the name of. Very cool bringing together of a lot of old plot threads. A lot of thought and planning went into this...

I always missed Rypta after I wrote him away to become a god. It gives me a warm fuzzy to see him still saving the day.


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I understand.....

....your points.

It tends to be....

....a bad habit of mine.

He turns to the writer....

"Is it?"

"Yeah, alot of times it is....now stop breaking the fourth wall and get back to this post."

"Okay."



Glad you finally read it. And, of course I used Eugene. I couldn't resist having a HR Danny/Eugene fight.

And, yeah, the two Danny's were great in their integral linking of the teams. Rypta-Noodle and Eugene were alot of fun to use. And, of course, I thought it only appropriate that, after all this time, Rypta Gud'n get one more 'save-the-day' in. Although, I hope you understood the irony in his punishment.

I hope you, like everyone, just take it as paying homage to all the writing, and all the characters, we've done over the years. I had a hell of alot of fun writing it.

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Punishment? There's punishment?

I aint finished, man...


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