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Link Fox said:
My post kinda contradicts the brief conversation between Link and Doc in the control booth Grimm posted before, but I just came up with Link's excuse for not revealing his power.

In case you haven't noticed my posts are often very short because I'm not very good with description, specially during dialogue. Chewy could have made the same conversation last six pages if he wanted. Any tips on that, anyone?



Are you asking for help with improving your dialogue?

Some really good ways for doing so are to study works of writers (across various media) that are generally acclaimed for their dialogue. Tarantino, Bendis, etc. I'm sure somebody here can come up with more examples.

Also, a good way is to listen to the way real people actually talk. Go out in public somewhere and just listen to the people around you. Try to catch the rhythm and flows of their conversations. Without eavesdropping, of course. (Unless they're talking about something really juicy. )

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