I think I've given it enough thought by now...

I like both Vanguard as a company and Vanguard as a private organization. Just keep in mind, if we swtich over, we need to make the change as smooth as possible.

A La Perdita story would be interesting. We concentrated on the capital during the Christmas story, and I enjoyed that. It's the team's home base. Charles Dickens had London. Kipling had India. Faulkner had...oh...whatever that funky county in As I Lay Dying is called. We have La Perdita. Location can be very important in a story.

A chain is only as strong as its weakest link. And our stories are only as strong as our weakest characters and plot holes (er...like flying to Nevada...er...sorry). I don't like having secondary characters like Montag and Leslie so one-dimensional. They're not as important as the people on the field and in the bulk of the story, but that doesn't mean they have to be boring.


"You're either lying or stupid."
"I'm stupid! I'm stupid!"
Megatron and Starscream