Oakley,

I think you should edit the confrontation out of your post. Just have Louie leave the ring and disappear. Then he and Snarf can work out their confrontation, which should probably happen during Snarf's big prom date (which has now been completely fucked over, imo). You have really good ideas, but I think you're moving too fast. Try to plan your big plot points to take place from PPV to PPV. Let events unfold more slowly.

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