it's good. Who is the character? If he has memories of Gooz and Viper, I'd say one name (and that would be extra-cool), the fact that he was walking on water let me think he is just an ex-Vanguardian that has stopped to shave his head.
In any case, having fun is the only thing we want with this story, being there no plot at all.
Also, Pro, if you want to have fun, and write in a completely unplanned environment, try the Toughened Glass thread. We are at a stalemate there, as we have all the character gathered. One of your professional posts could be exactly what we need.
Another thing, about Jesus: have you talked recently with TTT, or ARE YOU TTT?
