Quote: Grimm said: great stuff, Euro. loved it. Loved the standoff with Rypta and Grimm. Loved the unexpected appearance of "you know who." Loved the Vanguards shifting through alternate eras (some really cool variations there.). All the interactions between the two groups.
Thanks again. I would have had much more time to write parallel versions for each Vanguardians, but I made a point with myself to complete the story being faithful to my orginal planning and without spending too much time over it. I have a big load of work, so I must control the time I spent over the stories. Yet, I am in a writing mood right now, and I can't detain myself from it.
Quote: I do have two MINOR complaints: referring to Grimm as a meta in the story. It should be very clear: Grimm does not have the metagene and is not a metahuman. His powers are mystically based. Also, Grimm couldn't crack the table, but Ozzy could? Grimm is far stronger than Baxter, and would have shattered the table. . .
About calling Grimm a meta, it's just a plain mistake. I DO know he's not, but that slipped in my writing frenzy. About the table, my idea was to have the table breaking "slowly", under the eyes of Kit. Grimm should have started it, and then one blow after another blow from many character, in the end it should have broken up. I forgot it while writing, so I had just Ozzie slam to crack it. Look at it this way: Grimm did a "controlled" hit, that just weakened the table; Ozzie, although less powerful, was much more enraged, the confrontation having heated up, so, with his blow, he cracked it.
