Okay, I gave it a shot, but I didn't write as much as I'd planned. I hope I didn't overstep my boundaries. I'm afraid that if I had continued to write what I began I most certainly would have. I'm still not sure about the limits and capabilities of the characters.
BTW, I was going to give Adrian Slawney a bigger role in my chapter, but I'm not completely sure how his phasing ability works yet, so I chickened out. I was also unsure whether Vireximius ever changes back to his civilian form or whether he's permanently "super-powered"... Anyway, I didn't want him to seem too powerful against Cicciotto, so I may have written Vireximius a bit weaker than described and the werewolf a bit stronger than described. And I'm sorry about doing nothing with Marlo except knocking him out. I honestly couldn't think of any other way that Dancer could overcome him.
I had a lot of fun with Dancer as well, which may be obvious, but I'm not sure I captured his personality correctly. Same with Adrian Slawney.
Anyway, I'm looking forward to seeing what comes next.
