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Awesome post, Pro. I think it's time I post something now...
By the way, when's JD due back? I'm not moving on to the second murder until he gets a chance to inspect the crime scene... I know he wouldn't forgive me if I didn't wait for him.
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Pro, admitting that Ozzy is David Dunn was the biggest mistake you ever made... because from now on, to me, he's David Addison. I'm sorry if it's wrong but... well, what can I do?
Ian wrote himself, I swear.
Chewy, sorry if I'm wrong in my take on Icarus (I'm talking about the CSI comment), but I figured that was better than having him stand around delivering interchangeable lines.
Still don't get a hold on Gaunt, Grimm, but I'll get there eventually.
I don't think I nailed Adem, but I'm getting a better idea of how he acts now.
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You're doing fine, so far.  Great, funny post. I'm very intrigued as to the meaning of the symbol on the note.
I'm also really interested in seeing what the La Perdita team has to deal with.
JD's back and is in the process of catching up.
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Also known as, Adem Different, Dirk Bell, and Foofur....but, I don't think that last one is used on the boards..... 
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Posted to the story. Finally used Adem a bit, and threw in a new clue, use it however you wanna. And I didn't follow up on either of Mxy's clues 'cso I've got no ideas on them
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Just a comment about Ozzy. And, I want you all to take this the right way, but, the guy went to Harvard (I never said he graduated! ). So, he's not a complete and utter buffoon. He's certainly may not be the brightest apple to fall from the tree, but, he's not a moron. I have absolutely no problem with anything done with him so far. He is what he's designed to be.....the every man in the any-situation. But, just remember to try and keep a balance whenever possible. He's not stupid, he just thinks like a boxer. All physical and body language. That's why he balances so well with Adem. Adem is cerebral and analytical. I certainly hope no one thinks I am complaining about how he's being used. I'm not. I'm loving it. But, just don't fall prey to extremes. Otherwise, when I write him as being proficient in a fight or against an adversary (which he can be), it will come off as completely out-of-character compared to how everyone else writes him. Thank you.
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1000 points for Chewy!
Not quite there... but you're in the same neighborhood.
Excellent post, too.
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Are we playing a game? Anyway, I removed Ian and Ruby, and the body, to the MRC. They're out until someone visits the autopsy scenes. I also removed the attacker. I originally had no intention of having her being anything to do with this story. Thought it would be fun to throw random elements in. And, thus, I have removed her because I really want to use her later for something completely different. I must say, also, Chewy.....excellent post! Wonderful stuff from Icarus, and I laughed my ass off at Ian and Ozzy. Nicely done.
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I've been catching up on everything the past couple of days and been figureing out what to write. But yesterday I got some really bad news, so I'm not sure if I'll be in the mood to add anything anytime soon. Don't wait up on my account.
whomod said: I generally don't like it when people decide to play by the rules against people who don't play by the rules. It tends to put you immediately at a disadvantage and IMO is a sign of true weakness. This is true both in politics and on the internet." Our Friendly Neighborhood Ray-man said: "no, the doctor's right. besides, he has seniority."
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OK, if you've got any observations on the crime scene I'm sure you can figure out a way to have Adem bring them up later on. I'll start the second murder right now. Hope you're ok.
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ER OF MURS!
Let's something a little different with this one. It may work and it may not.
Rick was killed by a neo punk goth whatever you wanna add street gang of metas resembling zombies called "The Dead". Mystery guy paid them couple of months ago and told em to do this guy at this precise date, at that precise place (he went there every... whatever day it is), and to inflict those precise wounds.
How you find out this info is up to you.
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Great post, CJ. The La Perdita team isn't as equiped to deal with crime scenes as the Europe team, and you captured that very well. The scenes in La Perdita should have a different "flavor" to the one in the Berlin scenes.
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Added a short post playing off of CJ's... but I didn't really wanna write a fight scene tonight. I'll leave that up to Pro or Grimm or someone who writes fight scenes really well.
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...Danny!
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Added a short post playing off of CJ's... but I didn't really wanna write a fight scene tonight. I'll leave that up to Pro or Grimm or someone who writes fight scenes really well.
Finally my chance comes along to write a fight scene WITHOUT MY CHARACTER and you offer it to everyone else. 
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Do post if you want to, Phil...
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Just to check, we're still allowed to post stuff for the Vanguard Europe mystery, right?
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Finally my chance comes along to write a fight scene WITHOUT MY CHARACTER and you offer it to everyone else.
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Added a short post playing off of CJ's... but I didn't really wanna write a fight scene tonight. I'll leave that up to Pro or Grimm or someone who writes fight scenes really well.
If you want it, it's yours, Philsy...
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Dammit, Phil, in the time it took you to post your complaint you could have added a post to the story(s).... Anyway, great stuff people. CJ, the part where Bri uses her vocals to send out a signal to RoboSquirrel was absolutely brilliant. DAMN good. Chewy, smooth and fast. Excellent build. Tell me, are you wanting Tiberius to come in to the murder scene, or, to help Grissom fight. Wasn't sure what you were saying.... Anyway, been out of town. Back now. Will try and write something tonight.
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Just to check, we're still allowed to post stuff for the Vanguard Europe mystery, right?
My opinion, let the VI guys do their stuff for a bit, to give them some time to play, and to not interrupt the flow of the story. But ultimately, it's down to whatever Mxy feels appropriate.
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I posted. Great story idea, Mxy! Sammitch, feel free to do something. I dug your big fight scene in the last story. 
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Chewy, smooth and fast. Excellent build.
Thank you, sir.
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Tell me, are you wanting Tiberius to come in to the murder scene, or, to help Grissom fight. Wasn't sure what you were saying....
Yes. Seriously, I wasn't sure... but, in all honesty, I'd just love to see more of him in action - either in an analytical or warrior capacity - so that I can be more certain of what exactly he's capable of. I mean, I have an idea of course, but I'd like to see what his creator has in mind.
So... whatever.
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Just to check, we're still allowed to post stuff for the Vanguard Europe mystery, right?
My opinion, let the VI guys do their stuff for a bit, to give them some time to play, and to not interrupt the flow of the story. But ultimately, it's down to whatever Mxy feels appropriate.
I think the VI part has been set up already, so a "Meanwhile..." back in Europe wouldn't hurt. Go for it, SPAMM.
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...Danny!
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Heh!
...why is that funny?!
Thing is- I can’t spell or type. I spell so badly my spell check doesn’t even know what I was trying to spell. And I have five Eisners HAHAHAHHA!!
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Because you taught us that fight scenes are fun and easy. Duh.
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It has nothing to do with your nationality, Danny. Nothing. Honest.
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Fantastic post Danny. You inspired me.
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Thanks. Next time I get to an action scene I'm hoping to have a go at Tiberius, if he's around.
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Hope you enjoy this little curveball. There is a reason for it, but I'm not allowed to say what it is. If you want to carry on the fight with the gang members, by all means, do so. I only ask that you do not go into why my character is there or whether he is allowed to bring certain other characters there. I reserve that one thing for myself. Thanks.
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I concur! I really really concur!
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COOL!
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Who's this Grimm character again...?
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Grimm is Pro, silly!
Nice work lately, guys!
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