Ok, just reviewed this thread to double check a theory of mine. Chewy, I think the problem we're having with this particular story is no sense of direction. By that I mean we have no idea what you're going for, if anything. Nowhere in the talk thread have you stated what the point of the story was or whether or not we are able to just run with it anywhere we want. Plus, something here or in a PM to a poster or two with some details, if you have them, could help it along.
As it stands now, I don't know whether or not to write the Church of Smoke and Mirrors as circus midgets in clown make-up with leprosy worshipping a giant statue of golden cow's anus or a bunch of Vampyre the Masquerade Wishagoths.
whomod said: I generally don't like it when people decide to play by the rules against people who don't play by the rules.
It tends to put you immediately at a disadvantage and IMO is a sign of true weakness.
This is true both in politics and on the internet."
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