Quote: Pig Iron said: I don't know why her hands would be bleeding from molding clay? the rest is good.
(a) The Amazons have a well-documented aversion to bladed weapons and other pointy things - including stone fragments in clay, dried bits, and so forth and so forth
(b) I wanted to symbolise the whole ... dare I say it, messy part of giving birth. There's a physical reason for the screaming, yelling, verbal abuse of nearby males and demanding drugs.
You want to write this for an American audience??? Kidding, I get it now--I wasn't looking for your script to be full of symbol. Good one.