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Jim Jackson said:
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Lor said:
Snowflakes stuck to the girl's eyelashes, slightly blinding her vision with the milky crystals. Pushing on the remote she unlocked her car and placed the bag on the passenger seat.

Suddenly a cold hand wrapped around her mouth and a body forced its self hard against her back. She tried to scream but it was muffeled as the man behind her shooved them into the car.

She landed hard on to the seat, her chin almost hit the emergancy break. She tryed to look back to see if she could see who it was. Her heart raced as fear engalfed her body. She squirmed under the massive man to try and fling him off.

He pulled hard at her panty hoes ripping them completely off. He relaesed his grip around her mouth and then grabed hard around her waist. With one motion he flipped her over.

She was about to scream when she saw his face. It was her husband, fullfiling one of her fanticies. He grined and continued to "rape" her, yanking off her underware she played screamed panting heavely. She beat a fist on his chest as he reached down and quickly opened his belt and pants whipping his dick out.

He then spread her legs hard as she tryed to kick him. He reached up and ripped her shirt open, buttons poping off. He took one of her breast and handled it ruffly. the other hand moved to his dick where he shoove it in side her and proceeded to thrust hard. she moaned and yelped grabbing onto the steering wheel behind her for leverage.

the both where panting hard, hearts raceing. He thusted harder and harder faster and faster. she came with a screaming orgasem. his face beaded with sweat as he thurst a few more time then came him self with a grunt.

he pulled out slowly as she fixed her shirt and hair. he belted and zipped back up and she climbed out of the car. they both hugged paasionately and agreed they should do this again as they both went their seperate ways. he got into his truck and she got back into her car. they both drove off for home.



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dick - size? cut? hairy/trimmed?
any description on her? large breasts? small? medium? Was she hairy? trimmed? shaved?
when he pulled out, was there noise? was it messy?

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