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Good story, Miercoles.
I was most impressed with your writing it from the feminine perspective. I've known several people who write as a hobby and I've been told that it is most difficult to write credibly in the voice of the opposite sex. I thought you did an excellent job of capturing the "sound" of a woman.
As far as the question of rape goes, I think rape is rape. Period. If the sex is not explicitly consensual, then it's rape. Doesn't matter if the rapee begins to enjoy it physically or not.
I've known several women who were raped; a couple at knife point and a couple instances of aquaintance rape. One of the ones raped at knife point admitted that, after a time, she began to physically enjoy the sex...once she figured the guy wasn't going to stab her. She didn't come or anything but, she said she kind of liked the sex itself. For her, the enjoyment of it added to her humiliation and ultimately presented serious issues for her as she tried to recover from the experience.
One of the ones raped by the a guy she knew casually also copped to enjoying the sex. Basically her situation was that she and the guy were just messing around, things went too far and he ended up taking the pussy. Her deal was that while she was attracted to him and would more than likely ended up fucking him at some point in the future, she wasn't trying to go there at that moment. Anyhow, dude wouldn't stop and eventually she ended up actively participating. She still thought of this as rape, refered to it as such and rightly so.
I just don't think that the violation of the act can be removed or mitigated by the enjoyment of it.
One other thing: why did you chose to use the stereotypical Black robber/rapist thing? Do you think that the race of the rapist is essential to the power of the story or could you have made the character....I dunno...a Greek Republican with bigot tendencies and still had the story resonate the same way?
Your portrayal of the Black Man's Penis was spot on...as I'm sure you know.
Oderint, dum metuant.
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Oderint, dum metuant.
You are a god damned idiot, you know that? You ought to be smacked upside your dumb-fuck head, even after all these years. Shame on you! -USCHI showin' some love
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If he was Greek, his penis wouldn't have been so big.
That's all I've got to say about that.
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Seriously though, there's no big meaning behind that. It was written as a fantasy fulfillment piece for my girlfriend and since she likes her men like she likes her coffee...well...you know.
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Bigot.
you know me personally?...or are are you just a militant black douchebag on a very high pedestal that likes to judge people?
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Wednesday, how is your girlfriend doing? Is she all better now?
"I offer you a Vulcan prayer, Mr Suder. May your death bring you the peace you never found in life." - Tuvok. 
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I was most impressed with your writing it from the feminine perspective. I've known several people who write as a hobby and I've been told that it is most difficult to write credibly in the voice of the opposite sex. I thought you did an excellent job of capturing the "sound" of a woman.
Sam Kieth can write women.
Old men, fear me! You will shatter under my ruthless apathetic assault!
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Yeah, Uschi...
I've read a couple of series by him that were written from the female perspective...Zero Girl and its sequel as well as Four Women.
The best I've seen at being write cross gender in comics would have to be Terry Moore on the Strangers in Paradise series. When I first got into the series about 7 years ago I figured he had to be either a woman or flamingly gay to write such realistic female characters.
Oderint, dum metuant.
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Bigot.
you know me personally?...or are are you just a militant black douchebag on a very high pedestal that likes to judge people?
Do I know you personally?
No. I'm sure that if I did, you would remember.
From reading your posts through the years, I know that you are Greek and that you are a Republican.
From reading this statement earlier in the thread:Quote:
However, the part about a Black man robbing a house and raping a woman is an appropriate stereotype.
I made the inference that you have tendencies towards bigotry. While I'm sure you meant it as a joke...and that's how Wednesday responded to it...I chose to go the other way with it. For what it's worth, I think that everyone has bigot tendencies. Some people just hide them better than others.
Am I militant?
No.
Am I Black?
Very.
Am I a "douchebag on a very high pedestal that likes to judge people"?
I guess that could be open for debate but, I'd say no. I don't make snap judgements about people. I base my assessment of people on what they say and do. I don't post much but, I do read these boards quite a bit.
The thing I find funny is that you attack me based on the word "bigot". I've seen loads of people call you all sorts of names and you don't get pissed. Why would someone saying you have bigot tendencies piss you off so much?
Relax, dude. I think you're one of the funnier guys on the boards. You usually don't take stuff so seriously.
Oderint, dum metuant.
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You're right I'm sorry. I just took it personally having someone call me a biggot. I am the furthest thing from it. But anyhow I have been attacked and judged alot lately by some members here and that kind of caught me the wrong way when it normally wouldn't. I apologize again.
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It's all good, playboy. You still my nigga...;)
Oderint, dum metuant.
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PJ, you are always okay by me! 
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Wednesday, how is your girlfriend doing? Is she all better now?
She pretty much fully recovered. She went back to work about a week ago. I think the new car helped her recover nicely...
Yeah.
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Glad to hear she is doing well! Yeah, new cars are cool, except for the way she had to get it.
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Been just over a year since we got the car. I haven't posted anything to this forum in a long time. That's kinda sad.
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Oh, and PJP has almost 5000 more posts than me.
Yeah.
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Been just over a year since we got the car. I haven't posted anything to this forum in a long time. That's kinda sad. Better late than never.. 
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still one of the best stories ever for getting a boner!
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Pretty racist though.
I mean, the burglar/rapist didn't have to be black.
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