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SpandexMonkeyMan said:
I struggle with action and exposition. Action doesn't come naturally to me, and exposition is so boring that I find myself turning off. Usually what I find helpful with exposition is to add a second narrative voice to proceedings and take the mickey out of it.



I'll give you the same advice I just gave not wedge, try reading what others like you have written.

Also, act the scene out to help you with the action. Do this in front of a mirror even, or ask a friend to help out. As I said in my first post, my fiction writing teacher once asked if I acted out the scenes in my story because I had a lot of action in it. He was surprised to find I didn't.

It's a rented tux ok? I'm not going comando in another man's fatigues.