Putting yourself and elements from your life into your stories is only natural. We write best when we are familar with our subject matter.
However, sometimes, it is good to try and get as far away from writing about yourself, Phil... Not completely, but at times, to be able to come up with new ideas. To challenge yourself.
I like your story.
"I offer you a Vulcan prayer, Mr Suder. May your
death bring you the peace you never found in
life." - Tuvok.
